Wednesday 31 March 2010

Progress Report 31/03/2010

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-Our trailer edditing is finally complete
-all thats left in repetitive analysis of it

ebi
-the one diagetic sound wasnt missing
- and if we didnt kepe losing sound bu we have recovered it know

whats next..
-come in 2mrw analysis it
- add the misisng diagetic sounf of a gunshot

SONIA

Tuesday 30 March 2010

Progress Report 30/03/2010

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- trailer is now 1minutes 55 (we think thats enough)
- done the sound bridge for our trailer
- thinking to dub in some dialgoue but nto sure if it works well
- loss of sound has stopped as we found the problem

ebi
- our trialer was 2 minutes
- if the sounds we have so far were fine
- we will try out dubbed and nto dubbed as i feel that it is better nto dubbed as not all charecters can re record, and there is much more important stuf to change rather than this as we aim not to edit in the holidays

SONIA

Monday 29 March 2010

Progress Report 29/03/2010

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- captured everything filmed
- nothing left to film
- cropped and put in all the shots we newly filmed
- we have found the songs were usin for our trailer
- rap beat, busta ryhme, and timbaland
- put the songs in
- our trailer is 1minute 54 secs long we think thats enough

ebi
- we had dubbed in voices for our dialogue shots
- if we had time to make the soound bridge for the songs

whats next..
- we feel we only need one more day to finish our editting
- were going to try and get dubs for our dialogue

SONIA

Sunday 28 March 2010

- SO FAR R TRAILER IS 1 MINUTE 50 SECS!!
- HOPEFULLI WE CAN FIND ENOUGH SHOTS TO MAKE IT 2 MINUTES

SONIA

WHATS LEFT TO FILM..

- Anthony with louie and emilio
- anthony sitting down with louie and emilio askin them to do a job
- still shot of anthony up to shoulders
- close up of anthony pushing gn towards louie on table
- and a shot before montage becuase ther a gap and its UNDECIDED!

soniA

Progress Report 27/03/2010

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- Came in ontime to edit on saturday
- editted in r new songs of choice
- added shots for everything we captured so far
- recorded tyler speaking again becuase b4 background noise was bad
- Changed texts so it fits in better

EBI
- We had all the shots that r needed
- had time to sort out the sound volumes
- had time to find last song

What Next..
- Film nick on monday
- add in last song
- put nicks shots in
- sort out sound volume for dialogue

SONIA

found three songs for traier one more to go!!

in order..







SONIA

Progress Report 26/03/2010

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- finished filming montage shots
- captured everything film so for
- editted in louuie and emilio
- left gaps for remaining shots
- i thought of shots that need to be filmed to fill in those shots

ebi
- finished filming nick
- finished all filming
- found all soundtracks

whats next..
- come in school tomorrow on a saturday and edit 9-1

SONIA

Progress Report 25/03/2010

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- finished filmin louie and emilo
- seperate shots so not so in order
- adeed in apologize instrumental to the endin

ebi..
- we could of finished filmin everythin
- sound was better

whats next...
-film shots for my montage
- find 2 more soundtracks
- edits sots in for Louie and Emilio

SONIA

Wednesday 24 March 2010

So Far

We need to...

- Add more songs

- Finish filmin louie and Emilio scene by 2mrw

- film raheam on phone syaing 'marry him first 2mrw

- Film nick louie and emilio on friday at lunch

- capture all new footage

- finish editting before easter holidays!!!!

sonia

SONG SUGGESTIONS?














SONIA

Problem!!

I showed our trailer to Mr Bush today he liked everything expect when Nick and Rabia meet, and them twos hugging scene...
  • As it is too much in cronological order!!
  • Therefore he suggects we film more of louie and Emilio to embed it with those scenes
  • I have come up with these shots ..

Louie and Emilio

- Shot of Louie and Emilio opening a door

- shot of louis pushing the bottom bit of the gun up which you close

- Louie pushing Priyesh against wall – Emilio pointing gun at priyesh (Where’s are money) (Sunny’s living room)

- Louie and Emilio Closing the boot (Camera in the boot)

- Louie and Emilio opening car boot and Louie and Emilio taking gun out (Camera in the boot)

And also a Montage

- counting money

- Nick putting a gun into someone hand

- Close up of Nick’s eye

- Close up of a rosary on nicks neck

- Gun being pointed at someone

  • I also think raheam syaing marry him first needs to be redone - maybe outside infront of shops whilst on the phone, as the background noise is really bad!!!
  • That leaves me to my Last critism WE NEED ATLEAST TWO MORE SONGS IN OUR TRAILER!!!!
  • all this need to be done asap to get bk on track and finish before half term

Sonia

Tuesday 23 March 2010

1 minute 55 has offically been editted in ...
5 seconds to go!!

Monday 22 March 2010

Progress Report 22/03/2010

1 MINUTE 52 SECS HAS OFFICALLY BEEN EDITTED WITH SOUND
8 SECONDS TO GO.. =)

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- found diagetic sounds
-Include car shot in montage
-added credits with diagetic sounds
- I added charecters names on the trailer

EBI
- We had enough shtos to make the full two minutes
- If we had another song

Whats Next..
- Capture the door scene
- Add Sophia and Anthony Dancing
- Add greed to trailer
- Film Emilio and Louie sticking gun up

SONIA

Sunday 21 March 2010

Our Logo


- Its very simple and striaght forward, however if you look at gangster trailers many of there titles are like this, so we wanted to make are title according to the typical genre convention of gangster

S
ONIA
We have officailly Changed our Trailer Name: SINS

And we have have a subtitle : We all have them

sonia

Progress Report 20/03/2010

Still editting even on a SATURDAY..

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- Added the Prime time productions to our trailer
- Done the ending Credits
- Done the Logo
- Changed our Trailers name to SINS as we decided one word is better
- so far we have eddited 1:50 of our trailer sucess fully
- I have filmed the door slamming shut
- I have filmed the Car moving forward for our montage
- We added soem diagetic sounds for opening prime time production (flicker noice)
- Diagetic sound for ending credits (Guns shots) - Iconography of the genre gangster
- Names for Charecters have been put into trailer

EBI
-We had enough shots to complete the full 2 minutes
- We could add another song to our trailer
- Filming was finished

Whats next..
-Film Tyler sticking gun up
- Film Louis and Emilio sticking gun up
- Finish all edditing by friday
- Finish print by Friday
- Finish folder by Friday
- Film a shot of money fallin so we can edit it over angel dancing

SONIA

Friday 19 March 2010

A new idea for the ending..


I have a new idea for the ending i talked with Mr Babu i think this will work..


- after Rabia picks up purse
- Raheam walks out
- Nick knocks on door
- Rabia and Nick walk out (close up of their feet)
- Raheam sticks up a gun we dont know who hes pointing it at
- Louie and Emilio Sick up gun we dont know who its being pointed at
- Door slams shut
- Fades into Our title saying deadly sins
- then fades to black we here a gunshot
- And coming soon appears

Whats done from that so far
-Rabia picks up purse
- Raheam walks out
- Nick knocks on door
- Rabia and Nick walk out (close up of their feet)

Whats left to film
- Car moving forward for montage
- Raheam sticks up a gun we dont know who hes pointing it at
- Louie and Emilio Sick up gun we dont know who its being pointed at
- Door slams shut

SONIA

Progress Report 19/03/2010

Still in editting process..

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- I done the coming soon and credits
- I done the production text
- added abit of the ending from what we have filmed

Ebi
-Filming was finished so we can finish puttin in the shots

Next Step
- We still need to film the car bit for the montage il do that 2mrw
- get diagetic gun shot
- Do Deadly Sins logo
- Finish Filming

sonia

Thursday 18 March 2010

Prime Time Production


I came up with this logo and i think it fits in well with our genre, its nto amazin but its a suggestion for what we could consider using ..

made By Sonia

7 Deadly Sins..


PRIDE - is excessive belief in one's own abilities, that interferes with the individual's recognition of the grace of God.

ENVY- is a type of jelousy against others , status, abilities, or situation.

GLUTTONY - is a desire to consume more than that which one requires.

LUST - is a craving for the pleasures of the body.

WRATH -is manifested in the individual who spurns love uses it when angry.

GREED - is the desire for material wealth or gain.

SLOTH - is the avoidance of physical or spiritual work.

Our film makes use of all of these seven Deadly sins in some way or another, therefore we have decided to included them within our trailer, and use 'Deadly Sins' as our title

SONIA

Whats been done so far..

Filming..
- Angel scenes
- Anthony's Scenes
- Tylers Scenes
- Sophias Scenes
- Louie and Emilio Scenes
- Angel and Anthony's Scenes
- Angel and Tylers Scenes

Editing..
- Done all of editting up to the last scene
- Put in sundtrack and edited the volumes to go with trailer

Individual..
- Finished Boths of my Prints and done photoshoot

over so far we have 1minute 31 secs of our trailer complete
20 seconds to go .. we can do it =)

SONIA

Progress Report 18/03/2010

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- Both of our photoshoots have been completed
- both of us have got back first print drafts
- Only last scene left of trailer
- music fits in well

ebi
- All the shots of last scene was filmed
- if editting could of been done today after school

Whats Next..
- Finish off last scene so we can give camera back to miss
- Finish off Print
- do 'prime times prouction text'
- do the title for the end of trailer
- do coming soon and credits for the end of trailer

ANAM CAN YOU PLEASE COME AND EDIT WITH ME AT LUNCH, BECUASE U DIDNT YDAY
SONIA

Are Actors..

Tyler (Angels Helper) - Raheam Omar...

Emilio (Gang member) - Vikram Dade...


Louis (Gangmember) - Sunny Dhunna...

Sophia (Innocent girl) - Rabia Azam...

Anthony (Protagonist) - Nick Cox...


Angel (Femme fatale) - Prabhmeet sura...


SONIA

Filming is not finished still more shots for the ending need to be done!! asap

Sonia

Tuesday 16 March 2010

Final scene

Finally, filming has finished. ! THANK GOD !
what got done


Nick knocking on door.
Rabia and Nick leaving the house.


Now editing can be finished and all clearing up of shots, cutting tiny bits out, transitions etc etc and hopefully by the end of next week all editing will be completed so we can concentrate on creating the folders

Anaam

Monday 15 March 2010

The song we will be using for our trailer is



SONIA

Progress Report 125/03/2010

still in the editting process..

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- finished editting whats captured so far
- FOUND A SONG!!!
- editted the song to go with what we captured so far
- Done my empire photoshoot

EBI
- If we could of finished filming the last scene today -but actor was
unavailable
- if all of photoshoot was finished

Whats Next..
- film final scene
- start loggin
- do photoshoot

SONIA

Sunday 14 March 2010

Changed

There are some shots which we have decided to take out and some scenes which we have decided to change.

When Anthony and Sophia meet- this scene has been changed three times now but we think the scene we have decided to go along with will help the potential audiences to understand exactly what the relationship between the two is.

When angel finds out that Anthony has a girlfriend- this is one of the hardest scenes to show beacuse we didnt want it to look to typical and also we did not want one long scene of Angel finding out so we found a way to guide the audience to believe that Angel has found out but also at the same time chose little shots os Anthony and Sophia together to show the growing relationship between Anthony and Sophia.

Final scene - we came up with the initial idea of juxtaposing good and bad but we think that this may be a bit to obvious for the audiences to understand what the ending of the movie will be like, so there is some contemplating about what we think the last scene should include.

Anaam

Saturday 13 March 2010

Story Board

Deadly sins storyboard, finally uploaded.. =)















Sonia