Problem!!

I showed our trailer to Mr Bush today he liked everything expect when Nick and Rabia meet, and them twos hugging scene...

• As it is too much in cronological order!!

• Therefore he suggects we film more of louie and Emilio to embed it with those scenes

• I have come up with these shots ..

Louie and Emilio

- Shot of Louie and Emilio opening a door

- shot of louis pushing the bottom bit of the gun up which you close

- Louie pushing Priyesh against wall – Emilio pointing gun at priyesh (Where’s are money) (Sunny’s living room)

- Louie and Emilio Closing the boot (Camera in the boot)

- Louie and Emilio opening car boot and Louie and Emilio taking gun out (Camera in the boot)

And also a Montage

- counting money

- Nick putting a gun into someone hand

- Close up of Nick’s eye

- Close up of a rosary on nicks neck

- Gun being pointed at someone

• I also think raheam syaing marry him first needs to be redone - maybe outside infront of shops whilst on the phone, as the background noise is really bad!!!

• That leaves me to my Last critism WE NEED ATLEAST TWO MORE SONGS IN OUR TRAILER!!!!

• all this need to be done asap to get bk on track and finish before half term
  
  

Sonia